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Suzie's avatar

After your voice returns

from the speakers,

I catch and caress it

like a branch of

my apple tree in blossom.

🖤 beautiful

Eve Zennarrow's avatar

Thank you, Suzie! Music always finds a way into my poems. ;)Thanks for reading!🌹

Strung Out on Plenitudes's avatar

“Push the piano” - alliteration restrained, a well-placed reward!

Eve Zennarrow's avatar

Push the piano, preserve the possibility.

Strung Out on Plenitudes's avatar

Perfect!

Eve Zennarrow's avatar

Damn, I like it too. That should have been the line! I might change it now. 😅

Strung Out on Plenitudes's avatar

Look, it’s our first collab!

Eve Zennarrow's avatar

“You make me want to be a better poet”